Mise-en-scene
- Good gun use
- The empty room had a good effect made you focus on the radio
- typical dress of a hero - tank top and bandage added to this effect
Cinematography
- lots of different shots, good mixture
- good close up shots
- point of view shot of gun should of been more in the middle
- shot of radio wobbles
- nice point of view shop
- nice shot of lighter being the source of light
Editing
- match on action shots not acurate
- radio shot, jumps, should be continuous shot
Sound
- couldn't hear what was said on radio, to muffled
- we couldn't under stand eithert
- good use of diagetic sound on the radio, however it's unclear
Labels: Alex, Dan, Richard, Will |
